I like the stuff u made.I like how u done that bee.That looks so cool and pretty
thanks for that comment.
Great use of adverbs and you have used so many! Why don't we put this one on our class blog as an example of adverbs? What do you think?
That is a good idea. ;)
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Your writing certainly describes the scary situation with the swarming bees. I love the vocabulary you have used, it paints the picture that allowed me to imagine what the situation would have been like. Pretty scary!Mrs Smith