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Thursday, 15 October 2015



This afternoon there was some bees happily coming into our school. The bees ferociously chased the kids into the class. The kids sprinted quickly around to their class and squashed through the door.

                
                    

                    

10 comments:

  1. I like the stuff u made.I like how u done that bee.That looks so cool and pretty

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  2. I like the stuff u made.I like how u done that bee.That looks so cool and pretty

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  3. Great use of adverbs and you have used so many! Why don't we put this one on our class blog as an example of adverbs? What do you think?

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  4. Great use of adverbs and you have used so many! Why don't we put this one on our class blog as an example of adverbs? What do you think?

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  6. Your writing certainly describes the scary situation with the swarming bees. I love the vocabulary you have used, it paints the picture that allowed me to imagine what the situation would have been like. Pretty scary!
    Mrs Smith

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